So far the change to 1st person POV appears to be working. It might be a little too soon to render final judgment. I might not be able to do that if and until the manuscript is completely written.
But so far so good, I think. The three chapters I have done so far appear strong and I think they are, but who ever really knows? I also want to thank everyone who gave me well wishes when I started this new POV. Your support is invaluable.
Over the next week or so I will be busy headed to a wedding so I won’t be around. But I hope to have some new posts for you when I return. Thanks!